Re: Critique-- Group 3

Walker Lamond (twl2a@uva.pcmail.virginia.edu)
Wed, 24 Apr 96 17:55:53 EDT

4, a group:

The graphic design is the strongest part of your project. The colors, the
backgrounds (i like those spiders and that suburu makes me want to vroom
vroom away) are well chosen.
you get dashes

--As pretty as it is I would rather not go back to the main page very often.
--do you really need the IATH icon or the copyright info?
--doesn't the web just perfect for descibing the crazy structure of dreams,
great idea and well put together. It allows that line between fiction and
fact to be blurred which achieves three things. The dream realm is more
completely represented than in most other media that have attempted it. It
attacks head on the idea of art as a hybrid of fact and fantasy. How
trustworthy is the narrator? When does this documentary turn into a spoof of
itself? Are all these artists lying to me?
--It would be really cool if a real hand could reach out of the screen and
slap you every once in a while. For now one of you should just hide behind
the terminal.

colors, colors, colors! and brains once and I guess one of Aristotle's
paintings. Thank you for letting me touch it.

Walker