Group 1 critique
Amber Marie Jones (amj8e@faraday.clas.Virginia.EDU)
Fri, 19 Apr 1996 11:51:43 -0400 (EDT)
> Group 1,
> The only confusion I felt when looking at your project was in
> determining how all of this will fit together. Each string fit
> with your topic, yet I was wondering if it was possible to put
> an exit from within the string. Some of them took longer to
> end than I wanted to stay, so I would place exit points at
> every five pages or so. I know Barb is trying to figure out
> map edit, so maybe you could even shorten the strings and make
> them separate mapped areas connected by links? Otherwise I
> found your project really interesting. The dance lesson is
> pretty cool, but maybe some info on dances of the eighteenth
> century would help explain what's going on?
> Amber
>