Re: Group I Project

Eva Nicole Siegel (ens2k@uva.pcmail.virginia.edu)
Thu, 25 Apr 96 21:46:54 EDT

So, I'm a slacker. Here I am, Thursday evening trying to critique some
projects. Unfortunately, the etiquette project is not accessable; i.e. I
can't get in there to critique it. I guess I'll just talk about what I
remember from the project before. First and foremost, I really like the new
intro page...and the flesh toned head is a nice change. I think the new page
really gets the reader intrigued--piques interest in the various topics of
the project. So nice work there.

Second, I liked the dance lesson. I also like the idea of mingling the dance
lesson with some Nietzche (sp?). Maybe also link it to some random etiquette
about dancing? What I mean is maybe have the server push thing run its
course, and with each new positioning of the dancers have a new quote, like a
Nietzche and then some ettiquette or whatever....just a suggestion.

Third, while I liked the server push for how to speak correctly, it was way
too long for my taste (meaning that I lost interest after about three or four
minutes of being force fed language requirements, but maybe that is what
you're going for--the force feeding of ettiquete?). Maybe you could break
the server push down into two or three smaller units? I really liked the
actual text (fonts) used, and the variant therein.

Fourth, I'm really really really looking forward to the lesson on perversion
and the other one on poisonous literature. When can we see that? I'm
agonizing in anticipation.

So all in all (and largely from memory) I like the project in progress and
I'm eagerly looking forward to the finished product. Wonderful intro page.

Ottimo!

Eva