Group V crit take two
Archie Austin Wallace (aaw5a@faraday.clas.Virginia.EDU)
Thu, 18 Apr 1996 23:36:48 -0400 (EDT)
Ok, now that I seem to have fiugured out how to send email, it only took
me four years, I think I'll take another wack at your project. Simply
put, It looks slick. The introductory screen looks very nice and
introduces a very intuitive user interface that quite happily reminds me
of Choose your Own Adventure books. As I wandered through the corridors
reading the little story that unfolds I yearned to see how to get to the
"end" and find out the culmination of the "story." A couple of
questions. Is there any other point to going into the cathedral other
than salvation? What is computerized salvation like? To be honest, I
couldn't get past the first ten nodes or so because my computer locked
up. I don't think this is a function of the project rather it is my
computer that was a speed demon in 1992 and is not really prepared for
all this web stuff. Another question is how does the haunted aspect fit
in and does it figure into salvation? Maybe stating these things at the
beginning would be a good idea to further orient the reader before they
get lost inside. Looks good and I look forward to seeing the finished
project.