The project looks very well organized and the graphic design is
very well done especially on Palimpsest. It seems like a really
good balance between graphics and text. Caffeine looks like
something very cool, and maybe I don't get it and maybe it's
not all there but it kind of left me hanging.
I think the way that the project is very focused on
incorporating and jumping off from the class reading and theory
is great. It's a very ambitiou project and one well grounded in
literary theory from what I can tell.
I know not all of your stuff is there yet but jut one more
thing. I really liked the language poetry and enjoyed reading
it. It was well written from my point of view. I'm not sure I
udnerstand why it is especially suited to the web in the form
that it is in however. I think the mission of the project is
great in designing peices of a magazine soecifically for the
web, but I didn't get that impression necessarily from the
poetry. Anyway, hope this is somewhat helpful even though I may
be talking about things which will be changed soon.
Laura