[tei-council] Fwd: Re: rendering of @validUntil in the Guidelines

[Kevin Hawkins]

On 6/20/13 4:20 PM, Lou Burnard wrote:
>
> On 20/06/13 19:36, Sebastian Rahtz wrote:
>> see
>>
>> http://bits.nsms.ox.ac.uk:8080/jenkins/job/TEIP5/lastSuccessfulBuild/artifact/release/doc/tei-p5-doc/en/html/ref-join.html
>> http://bits.nsms.ox.ac.uk:8080/jenkins/job/TEIP5/lastSuccessfulBuild/artifact/release/doc/tei-p5-doc/en/html/ref-relationGrp.html
>>
>> one bit more to do.
>>
>> shout now if you want a different form of words.
>
>
> Could the word "Deprecated" be a link to a page briefly outlining our
> deprecation policy?
>
> "This feature will be withdrawn on <date>" seems a bit clearer than
> "Valid until <date>" (which sounds more like a coupon for  something)

I'm sorry, I should have read this more closely earlier.  We don't that 
it will removed on that date, just sometime after then.  So this is 
misleading.  We need something like:

This feature will be withdrawn after <date>