[tei-council] Responses to Primary Sources #3 (up to the end of 11.3.3.1)

[Martin Holmes]

On 11-11-28 07:31 AM, Lou Burnard wrote:
> On 27/11/11 22:26, Martin Holmes wrote:
>> Next batch, hoping it's not too late:
>
> On a quick read through these all seem like useful improvements, though
> one or two border on the purely stylistic. This part of the chapter has
> not been substantially revised since it was first published in P3.

Where they seem stylistic, I hope they're actually improving clarity. 
I'm trying to keep non-native speakers in mind. There's some Jamesian 
syntax floating about that must be very intimidating if your English 
isn't great.

Blame my 16 years as an ESL teacher. :-)

Cheers,
Martin

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Martin Holmes
University of Victoria Humanities Computing and Media Centre
(mholmes at uvic.ca)