critique of group V
A. Wise (alw5a@uva.pcmail.virginia.edu)
Fri, 26 Apr 96 11:53:24 EDT
It is clear that you all have put a lot of time and effort into this project.
It is a fantastic journey into the macabre. The repetition of images holds
sections of the narrative together. The grey tone color scheme really
reinforces the mystery. In contrast, the yellow and red text in some
sections really grabs you. It is interesting that these usually cheerful
colors add to the goulishness of the overall project. I found very few
technical problems. On one page however, some text is covered by an image,
but that should be easy to fix. Overall this is a great project. Spooky!
Ali