Since this project is really several projects, I thought I
would try to say a bit about each section:
Mamma Poems. Lot of dead-end links here. Madonna is cool, and
tea pot is huge. I like the Madonna link, but would like to
see more.
Kitten Silencers. Sounds good. Much of the vocabulary goes
sailing right over my noggin. Didn't have time to look them all
up, but from what I've seen, this is engaging to say the least.
It's also scary.
Frisk Pant. "automatic respiration stone collecting at her
cul-de-sac"--this is classic. Very original and creative.
jsm5q/node06.html--this node is huge. Very difficult to
read--scroll right, down, left, right, down, left...you might
consider sizing it down. As it is its terribly frustrating.
Quilted. I actually like it when the quilt showed the patches
youd been to before. Maybe thats just me. Again, found a
couple of dead ends in this one. Interesting. The picture of
the swimming hole is my favorite part--stole that one from you.
Caffeine. I have to say this threw me for a loop until I
actually got to something besides atomic structure diagrams.
How do you get out of this aside from back..back..back? But I
have to say that even the diagrams have stellar graphics, as do
most of the nodes of this project. But specifically Caffeine
and...
Palimpsest. Really like this one. How the hypertext webster
works is well beyond my conception. I think that this one
exemplifies what you can do with hypertext.
I think that this project is extremely well organized and has
potential for further hypertextual exploration. Sorry that
comments for each are so short but its as if each section is
really another project. Have you considered linking within the
projects or are they intentionally closed from one another.
Just curious?
Enjoyed this project. Anyone considering continuing with this
thing next year?
Adam
-- winters@virginia.edu